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                               ~Parental Unit pt. 4~

                                4 years later..

          Well by the 4 years raising Zap, he'd had grown a bit, he was still really small. Zap looked like a baby still, only that he can walk and talk and everything. I just wish I had a little more time with the smeet but sadly... I'm more sick than ever. The disease has finally taken over my body. I can already feel myself dying off slowly. I'm more worried about telling Zap the news about me dying. A baby shouldn't deal with this stress but I guess it has to happen.

Meanwhile I'm laying on the couch with a blanket warming me up while Zap is watching t.v and sitting on the floor, laughing at the cartoons on the television of a cat chasing a mouse. Hmph, I will never understand these human shows and their way of comedy.

Zap turned his body towards me and smiled. That smile... It only makes me feel worse... I really hate thinking about breaking my smeet's spirit.

"Mama..." Zap asked.

"Yes Zim-child." Zim answered.

Zap stood up and rushed towards me and hugged my arm.

"Mama... I love you." Zap purred and nuzzled my arm.

"Zim loves you too cutey." Zim smiled and kissed Zap's head.

Zim sighed and bit his lip. "Uh... Zap. Zim needs to talk to you." He said, already feeling uneasy about it.

Zap nodded and watched his mother struggle to get off the couch. Zim groaned and cracked his back. "Er... That's a pain." He mumbled to himself. Now walking to Zap's bedroom, Zim looked down at his baby who was holding his hand and had a smile on his perfect little face.

Zim entered the bedroom and picked Zap up and sat him down on the bed. Zim sat next to him and scratched the back of his neck. "Zap... Erm... This isn't easy for Zim to say but... Uh... Zim won't be well... and uh.. Zim won't be alive any more longer because of a fatal irken disease."

Zap's smile had wiped off his face, now only showing a frown and teary eyes. "NO! MAMA NO! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME! NO NO NO I LOVE YOU! NOOO! I DON'T WANT YOU TO LEAVE ME ALONE!" Zap sobbed violently and hugged Zim tightly, digging his claws in Zim's waist. "I-I... I don't... w-w-want you to go Momma!" Zap cried.

Zim started to cry a little and held his child close. "Zap, Zim needs you to be strong. You won't be alone either, you'll be sent to live with your father."

Zap wiped his tears and looked up at Zim. "I have a daddy?" He asked curiously, lowering his antennas in pure confusion.

Zim stroked Zap's hair back and nodded. "His name is Dib... Dib Membrane. His sister, aka your Auntie Gaz gave me Dib's new address, so that's where you'll live for now on, okay sweety. He'll take good care of you and watch you grow up. I've already packed up your bags. Once you see your father give him a note that I'll give you once you leave. There's 2 more notes in an envelope in your bag for your daddy, but give it to him in a month since he'll be comfortable with you already by then." Zim said.

"Momma... I don't want to go. I want you... I love you Momma." Zap whispered, hiding his face in his sleeves as he cried more. "Please, don't send me to a stranger, I'm scared."

"There is no reason to be afraid my sweet, you'll have your PAK. If anyone hurts you just use your PAK legs to destroy them." Zim chuckled innocently.

On the same day Zim had packed up more of Zap's stuff from his room. He shrunk the luggage filled with his son's stuff with a shrink ray. Zim stood behind Zap but on one knee and opened the child's PAK, placing the tiny luggage in there and the shrink ray.

"Zap, when you get to the house, you'll have your own room and once you do get your room you will need to take out the tiny luggage from your PAK and the shrink ray and unshrink the luggage. Also I should give you these..." Zim took out a suit case from behind his back and held it in front of Zap's back.

Zap turned around and looked at it curiously.

Zim smiled at him then opened the suit case, revealing contacts that are brown instead of purple like Zim's when he use to go to skool.

"These, my son. These are contacts. Those are for your eyes and to hide your alien eyes from humans. Also once your in public you need to hide your antennas in your hair... Zim will not want his smeet to be in a science lab." Zim said and helped Zap put the contacts on. "There you go... You look just like your father except you have green skin, no ears, no nose, 3 fingers, 2 toes... eh you get it... well I guess your ready baby, I'll call a cab." Zim said and hugged Zap close, crying silently and nuzzling into his smeet. "Zim loves you Zap so very much."

Zap sniffled. "I love you too mama."

Zim let go of Zap and held his hand, walking him to the living room. Zim set Zap on the couch and helped Zap in his black sweater and red mittens. "Zim has heard from the human weather channel that it will be cold so Zim does not want you to catch a cold." He said and kissed Zap's forehead. "There we go, nice and toasty... Oh and also Zim wants you to remember him by from this stuff toy I got you." Zim smiled and handed Zap a teddy bear almost as big as his son.

"Wow! Momma I love it! I love my teddy! I'll name him 'Z' which stands for Zim, and I'll love him forever." Zap said happily and hugged his new teddy bear. "Thank you momma."

Zim smiled and pet Zap's head. "No problem my smeet." He said then heard the taxi beep from outside the house. "Hm... Your ride is here." Zim sighed.

Zim walked Zap out of the house and to the car. Zim opened the car door and helped Zap in his seat, buckling the smeet's seat belt. "Alright... Remember sweety, Zim loves you and soon you'll be with daddy. You'll also have Z by your side, he'll keep you safe." Zim told his son then kissed his head. Zim gave the driver a paper that has the address to Dib's house and money to pay. "And make sure not to pick anyone up, I want only my son in this car." Zim said sternly to the driver as the driver nodded. Zim hugged Zap and smiled. "Love you." Zim whispered to Zap then closed the door to the car. He watched as the taxi slowly started to drive away, and after it drove away he sighed heavily. Zim frowned, walking back to the house.

"Good bye, Zap Membrane. Have a good future.."
Parental Unit part 4

Part 3: [link]
Part 5: [link]

Parental Unit is a story about Dib and Zim's 4 year old son 'Zap', who leaves his home aka Zim's house to go to the big city to find his daddy 'Dib'. Zim and Dib dated and of course had sexual intercourse with eachother. Later on in those months Zim bigger and was more cranky then usual. Zim and Dib got in an argument then Dib left Zim to start a new life in the big city, as Zim told Dib he was pregnant but Dib didn't believe him.. Zim later on in those 4 years took care of their smeet until he died from a rare irken disease. thus, leaving the smeet alone, but Zim did tell his smeet that Dib lives in the city and to go find him.. Sooo here starts the adventure of Zap



Parental Unit (c) Me of course
Invader Zim (c) Jhonen Vasquez
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Aki210 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
Cry forever 
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhandspazzplz: Guh, poor Zim.
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Aki210 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
He was so young Hatsune Miku-07 (Cries) 
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah he was. It is sad, curse you irken disease Dx<
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Aki210 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Stupid irken disease Very angry 
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diamondlove01 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Artist
Did anyone else cry while reading this? Its too cute but also sad...
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
X3 thanks lol. It does have it's moments
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diamondlove01 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Artist
Hay when you make a story how do you like make a story?
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
It's hard to explain. The story just comes to me... when I get inspired by something. I get like these ideas in my head and I start to think of it as a story.
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diamondlove01 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Artist
Oh. I am trying to work on this zadr story called mistletoe and I am finished with it but I dont have a computer to type it in. I am wondering. How do you post a story on a touch screen phone
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
On the bottom of the deviantart desktop for mobile website there will be options all the way on the bottom on deviant mobile and on it will say

Help & Info and next to it on the right will say Switch to Desktop site. Tap on Desktop site and it'll lead you to a normal deviantart site that looks like the computer version.
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diamondlove01 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you so much
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No problem :)
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Invader-Cookie Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*facedesk and sobs* chapter 4 and already sad as fuck
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I get that a lot about this story ^^;
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Invader-Cookie Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The hell bro? Ur such a good writer DX almost made me cry as much as Orange ( I really couldn't look at anything the color orange for a week without crying or whining) o3o
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks lol... I read ZaDr Orange too. It really gives me the feels.
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Invader-Cookie Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Who doesn't? I came down with a very bad case of the feels ;3;
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Those feels really are troubling x3. You can't control them, it always sneaks up on you
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Invader-Cookie Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ikr? Damn, I want to HUG zim XC possible ravish him ........ X3
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
x3
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LunaInvader Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Artist
Wait ! Zim dies in this chapter ? please respond me 
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, he does. He's too sick to care for Zap for one more day so he sends him off as soon as possible.
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LunaInvader Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Artist
poor Zim ! 
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah :(
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I was just thinking... if you'll allow it, I'll make a fan comic of this story :) It's so cute and heart warming, I can't resist :)

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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Heh sure, that would be great! I would love to see that :D Thanks lol:heart:
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

THANK YOU

...

I LUV YOO

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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No problem lol :iconflatteredplz:
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Huehuehue
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I cried so much... so happy yet so sad... I'm gonna burst out crying now...

 

no please no...

...sniff

snnnniiiiff

BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! BWAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!

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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I try my best to make the readers have the feels x3 it worked probably :la:
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthefeelsplz:
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WAAAAAJ

wait
Waj?
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I'm typing on my phone right now...
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I forgot xD
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theREALlpsmurder Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha
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AJ-Garcia Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Filmographer
so... sad.....
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I know :(
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Suicidal-Freakgirl66 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This actually made me cry *sobs*.... And I DON'T even cry *snif* plz make more
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I'll try to continue... my week has been busy ^^; but I'll see what I can do
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Suicidal-Freakgirl66 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay ok...no pressure and hope you have a great holiday!
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks ^^ heh you too
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Coravader-nightmare Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You know what dude! I cried! :iconcryforeverplz:
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aww D: I'm sorry
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Coravader-nightmare Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its ok... *sniff* when will you put the next? I kinda very excited and crying :iconcryforeverplz:
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Maybe this week hopefully, as long as I don't forget.
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Coravader-nightmare Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Then ill let you remember it.... Also the sequel...
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I-Luv-Emoboys Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Alrighty then ^^
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